Obviously you’ve put a lot of work into this. I’ve done photo montages for my family and the scanning and image preparation itself takes quite a while. I would have liked some of the shots to hold longer, these kind of videos can be very emotional for the target audience and it’s worth holding some of the more powerful shots a little longer. Also I’d replace some of the cheesy transitions (clock wipes etc) with simple fades – the viewer will be able to see each shot slightly longer also.
John Dickinson
Motionworks
https://www.motionworks.com.au