I love the underwater footage. I’ve seen a ton of underwater surfing, but the shallow water and dog legs is something very new.
I don’t get a sense of story. Who are the dogs. Is there a purpose to this? Is it just weekend fun? Didn’t thing the “dream sequence” really worked, going between the sleeping dog and the footage. Maybe slo mo the footage that the dog is dreaming about.
Still the light and flow of the water in the shallows and some of those dog shots looking up as they swim over is really unique. You have that going for you, now make it a story that I can understand. Introduce the dogs to me…show me how their character is different things like that.
Love that footage.
Rich Rubasch
Tilt Media Inc.
Video Production, Post, Studio Sound Stage
Founder/President/Editor/Designer/Animator
https://www.tiltmedia.com