Hi there.
Congrats on completing your first film! Great work.
A couple of crits.
One: I would avoid the use of handheld shots at all cost. Unless you have a glidecam the shaking hand motion becomes more than distracting and leads the audience to believe the film is unprofessional.
Two: If your talent is doing voiceover avoid them reading from a script. It sounds lifeless and does little to endear us to the character or story.
Three: Keep doing the work. It’s gonna get better and more rewarding the more you do it!
Keep it up.
steph