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my 1st film- comments appreciated
Here is a link to my short flick…I hope you check it and then let me know what you thought with some comments…its all done in Vegas 5. anyway any comments would be much appreciated…thanks
Also I would like to take the opportunity to look for editing work, so in case there is an available position out there, and you like my work, please contact me at od*********@***il.com
here is the link:
https://video.google.com/videoplay?do…04401493660890
stinkingenious
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Hi there.
Congrats on completing your first film! Great work.
A couple of crits.
One: I would avoid the use of handheld shots at all cost. Unless you have a glidecam the shaking hand motion becomes more than distracting and leads the audience to believe the film is unprofessional.
Two: If your talent is doing voiceover avoid them reading from a script. It sounds lifeless and does little to endear us to the character or story.
Three: Keep doing the work. It’s gonna get better and more rewarding the more you do it!
Keep it up.
steph
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