This should be on the demos forums…but
Basically very boring. Titles are boring and sometimes out of title safe. I guess you need interviews. Also work on your lower 2/3. Spice it up a little – needs graphics. Don’t take my criticism to bad…you should see the crap I produced in College 🙂
Don’t worry Brett…in 10 years you’ll look back at this project again and say ” OMG…what was I thinking?” 🙂