First off, your work looks very good, Kudos!
Spicing things up to look more “MTV” or “E” will always be limited somewhat by the subject matter. It’s easier to do fast cuts to music when your story is Paris Hilton visiting a fashion show compared to a story on Chinook choppers.
Also, keep in mind that as a one man band you can’t be everywhere shooting everything, while “E” can hire crews to shoot each segment.
So there are some limitations to what you have available even before you start, ie actual footage vs stock photos…
All that being said, couple of things you might want to consider. The first piece had quite a few photos, but they were all stactic. MC has the pan and zoom tool, just using that will add a bit more visual interest.
In a few of the pieces that had video, why not use the nat sound? It doesn’t need to be overpowering, but it will add some texture and feel to the segments.
I liked the use of graphics between the pieces. One thing you might consider, customizing some of the backgrounds used. As I watched the 2nd video, the bkg with the squares, I thought it might be cool if you put video/stills in those squares, matching the moves. It could be just generic army stills, or if you the time you could customize it per story. The latter option would take more time, but if you had AfterEffects, you could set the entire operation up once—then just replace the footage per story.
Not sure if it’s possible based on what I saw, but if you could incorporate people giving soundbites on location, that would add a bit more energy too. It looked like you were working with quite a bit of b-roll from a lot of different places, so not sure if that’s an option.
Overall I thought based on the material you did a very good job as you are delivering news, not NewsTainment. One thing I did years ago when I first started editing was to keep a notebook next to me as I watched television. If I saw something I liked I would sketch it quickly, make some notes and write down ideas of how I could incorpate what I saw into the work I was doing. Just keep watching things that you like and emulate the things you think will work for you.
Again, overall, I really liked what you produced. The host’s had good energy and were very positive, so that really helped keeping things moving. The segments weren’t too long, you told the stories succinctly and kept me interested and not bored.
Johnny Cuevas, Editor
http://www.ckandco.net