Sorry. I made it public.
In response I think its good. I think it could be better, maybe a bit smoother. it seems choppy from the camtasia footage. I used a combination of vegas camtasia and digital juice content with a voice over. I guess im really looking for technical advice rather than art/vision. I do like the concept and hope to start making more like it, but am interested in others opinions and advice on ways to enhance the overall quality.
Thanks again.