Since you didn’t shoot it, you were limited by what they sent you. Perhaps you could have taken one of the shots of the girl finishing with arms raised high (if I remember correctly) or some other finishing moment of triumph, progressively slow-mo it, progressively zoom in on her face as far as you can during the slow mo, and perhaps add some effect such as Lens Flair. Finish freezing on her sweet face, fade to black. Perhaps you could have preceded this shot with a short montage of other moments of triumph, or else placed it after a particularly difficult match or demonstration.
Every story needs a beginning, middle and end. The longer the story, the more dips and rises and or subplots you need to sustain and nourish your audience. Sometimes the material lends itself to that easily. At other times, it’s a bit like trying to find a pearl in an oyster while not knowing which of the 10,000 oysters in front of you actually contains the pearl.
Rick
Rick Wise
director of photography
Oakland, CA
http://www.RickWiseDP.com
email: Rick@RickWiseDP.com