It depends on the situation and story you want to tell, but most of the time I always cut the hair off in the close up, emotion is in the face, not in the hair. (yes I’m bald myself 🙂
What I personally find wrong in your frame is how you placed the guy, horizontally. I would place the guy more to the right of the frame, so there’s more space on the left of the eyes than on the right. (suggestion, no bad intentions 🙂 )