Dude – 100 times better. I’d still drop font sizes down a bit so that everything will fit on one page on a monitor set to 800×600 resolution. It helps to plan your site for the least common denominator, in this case being grandma on a pc with 600×800 resolution.
Maybe copy edit some of your text, too. For example, this segment:
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Have a video or digital film project?
Need some editing?
Or sophisticated motion graphics?
Perhaps an original music track or bed?
Need help with a script?
Maybe some animation?
Let us work with you to make your project sparkle!
Be sure to explore our video and music samples!
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…could be reduced to one line like:
“Edit, Design, Animate, Compose, Write – That’s how we roll.”
That might not be the best copy for your actual brand, but it’s succinct.
You have maybe 20 seconds to get your point across before a surfer leaves. When you add a line, remember that it’s taking away from the legibility of another line that might be more important.
Less is AlWAYS more.
That’s what I told my wife on our wedding night anyways. 🙂
John Davidson____ writer | producer | director____https://www.magicfeather.tv