Thanks for the critique. Yes the audio is a scratch track. We will have hired talent do the final VO. Unfortunately, I can’t do much to address the script as it is what the company has decided on. I will see if I can push them to change the wording. It opens with the logo, but I may bookend it and I like the idea of keeping it on the screen throughout the video. I don’t have a lot of great testimonials to work with, but I can’t definitely trim them up. This is still the rough cut obviously. I will add lower-thirds to identify the testimonials. Again, I appreciate the feedback.