If I could make a suggestion…I think you’re trying too hard.
I *love* watching demo reels, because I’m a nuts-n-bolts guy with a broadcast news background, so I need inspiration. I’ve seen ’em all. So it’s hard for me to be blown away. But it’s typically the subtly smooth stuff that does it.
Lotsa guys know how to do funky effects (you seem to be particularly fond of a few) but it’s the sense of design, flow, all that abstract stuff that stands out. I remember at one of our studios we’d get tons of reels that looked like a car or furniture ad – pumping music, crap flying around all over the place…those got thrown in the trash almost immediately.
Not to mention that sooner or later the motion graphics design trend change, so you need to show some diversity and versatility. The whole flashy flickery quick-cut thing is old, kinda like the vector art style. Sorry I don’t have enough college to know the art school terms.
I’m no motion graphics genius and have no formal schooling, so I can’t talk down to anyone in this business; but I’ve been around long enough to have an eye for this sort of thing. I’d suggest that you look at a bunch of other demos from people that are already established in this business, and see how they mix temperance with talent.
Clint
Oh, by the way, a good place to start is http://www.justincone.com/tween/. There are links there to shops that are already doing the best work in the business; they’re excellent role models.