Definitely agree with the 2 previous posts. I think also knowing what it is for can inspire ideas. A title for the sake of a title can be very difficult. Knowing its purpose can give you direction. Though obviously for those just starting out, it’s good to simply create in order to learn the interface and how the program works and thinks.
I will say the text is pretty big and bold for my tastes, though maybe if it’s for mobile devices or something like that, you may like it that way.
Also, there’s definitely a few tricks I learned that can be applied to almost anything. Such as, like they said, having a slight zoom in, which just adds a bit of intensity and interest to the design. Vignettes can be good and give focus to areas within the image. You can give the image more depth by really focusing on how you can utilize the background and foreground. You can turn it from 1 longer clip into several tighter micro clips with then the big reveal at the end of the final logo. Just some thoughts.
Often too, I add a ton of effects only to find that it becomes a bit distracting and end up just cutting away until the end result is actually fairly simple yet sleek and clean.
Overall pretty darn good though!
Nathan Walters
Halo Union Productions
https://www.HaloUnion.com