You need a non-cursing/urinating version of the trailer. You also need a better trailer – it looks like it was edited by the same people that cut the film, which tends to result in favorite shots/scenes being used even when they don’t add anything to the presentation. The mix of the trailer sounds weak. It needs whooshes, bangs, hits, etc. Spend a little time making the trailer better and you’ll get better results in all your marketing endeavors. It’s all over the place. If you’re having issues where there are no summary lines to weave the storyline into the trailer in a more clear fashion, have the talent record a line or two in ADR and fake it. The text should never be fullscreen like that, fyi. It’s terribly difficult to read.
On the bright side, it seems like the production quality of the elements you have to work with are great.
Spend a little money on good library music, too. I personally love the Killer Tracks / Atmospheres music libraries, it’s just good.
John Davidson | President / Creative Director | Magic Feather Inc.