Hi Brett
FYI I am pretty new to editing so I think I can speak for ‘outside looking in’ crowd.
That said my opinion is as follow:
* I took offense at ‘The Suits’ thing, sure I thought of them all as ‘The Man’ back in my day (dating myself) but ,,, is that how they’d want to be remembered. Calling them the suits is kin to an attack depending on ones perception.
* Along the way we meet a bunch of people who have a given area of expertise but they are all doing one thing, talking form a lecture or podium. Just me IMO that is, but I’d rather envision them in the midst of their environment.
* The last part of the video just before, ‘Orientation is over’ does nothing to recruit is that is what this is intended to be. The kids are eating, drinking, sitting in groups and such. Almost waiting for something that never arrives. My thinking would have been to visually depict a transition. I’d follow some ‘newcomers’ for a few scenes where they are arriving, being welcomed in, going from ‘newcomer clothes’ to lab coats and libraries, a study hall moment, working in the lab, the face of a kid who just had a ‘eureka’ moment.
* Last, i like all the responses but would encourage you to study Mark Suszko’s comments. I think Mark has the ‘time and grade’ (army term) and is giving you a wealth I cannot but strive to posses.
nuf said
joe
JOE
X-Porter
Gen 1:1