Ok guys, here is a revision. I took some notes and made some changes. I’m also starting my audio design and hoping there isn’t too much adjustment from here on out. I’d like your feedback though.
A couple things I noted in the video below are the following:
1. I removed a portion of the turbo in the beginning (backfire scene) which I will be putting back (look closely at the turbo closest to you).
2. The audio in the first part seems too quiet relative to the second half. I’ll turn this up.
3. The “E” in the “VIDEO” part of the 1320Video logo needs to be corrected, looks like a tracing issue. I’ll adjust the trace.
4. The shake is causing the edge of the video to expose a black background, need to stretch the image a bit to correct this.
Anything else you guys recommend? I decided to try out the sponsors at the bottom in 2D. Maybe I could bring those in with a little more enthusiasm? Some kind of cool text animation?
Does this “grab” you and make you want to see what follows? Is there anything that turns you away?
Thanks guys!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6VezujgsnCg