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Video Intro Project | Need feedback and improvement suggestions
Hey guys,
Haven’t had much luck over at the Video Copilot forums as far as getting feedback on my composition I’ve been working on. We are looking to replace our intro for our videos and I have been tasked to do just this. We are an automotive video source. Here is an example of one of our videos with the current intro video:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glgiiBHVc1A
I’ve taken some time to think of something that relates to automotive enthusiasts and came up with this new intro that features some cool turbochargers using Element 3D, depth of field, and motion blur. I really like where this is going, but I feel like the final scene doesn’t show the logo off. It’s as though everything bleeds together.
What suggestions do you have for me? I’d like some feedback, good or bad. I’m simply looking to improve this introduction.
Below are two links: one with text overlay of our sponsors and one using Element 3D to present the logos. Which looks better? I feel like the logos in the Element 3D representation are hard to read and don’t “pop.”
**SEE EDIT BELOW**
Thanks for your input, guys. I appreciate it!
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After many suggestions and edits, this is the most recent version of the video! Please let me know if you guys have any other suggestions as to how we can improve this. We are hoping this is the final revision but if you see something you feel could be capitalized on, let’s make it happen.
Thanks guys!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Q8Ue2x-qo0
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Made a couple *very* minor changes, including the more dynamic movement of the letters flying in an adjusting the optical flare behind the logo and the sponsor logo positions due to YouTube advertisement positioning.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R-32Om3plls
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