What can I add to or change this to make it better?

[Alexalex132]

Any ideas?

[Mike Derk]

I don’t think there’s enough there for anybody to make any comments that will help you.

That said, the pricetag doesn’t look real. I’d put the text onto the pricetag before it swings in, and try to make the tag look more like paper than a solid pendulum. Slow it down, make it twist in the wind a smidge, have it settle at the bottom instead of coming to a halt… I dunno.