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  • Opinoins on this short I did for Modern Day Advertising.

    Posted by Travis Heberling on November 4, 2010 at 8:54 pm

    Hi this was an intro to a longer series of shorts about modern day advertising.

    I would love to get some opinoins on what is liked and disliked. XD
    https://vimeo.com/16305036

    thank you!

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    Anthony Marzilli replied 15 years, 5 months ago 3 Members · 3 Replies
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  • Grinner Hester

    November 13, 2010 at 12:13 am

    Your treatments are fine. The pacing was slow between decades and I didn’t understand where you were going with the whole thing but some of the moves could accentuate your reel.

  • Travis Heberling

    November 13, 2010 at 6:11 pm

    Thank you for the opinion. =)

  • Anthony Marzilli

    December 3, 2010 at 7:25 pm

    I felt the camera was too tight on a lot of the words. I was trying to follow the words which my eyes were not able to keep up with a lot of it… and i was focusing on that so much that i was not able to even absorb the VO. I would back off a bit with the camera and try to keep more attention on the message. Cool moves…. but the message is the most important thing.

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