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[Jay Blanchard]

Could you provide a bit more info on what this was produced for? It’s an interesting look if it’s for, say, a documentary on media oversaturation. But if it’s the opening credits sequence for a popular TV talk show host, it might not work. A little context would help.

[Loubia]

thanks for the reply!

it’s an opening credits sequence for Tv talk show

cheers bubs

[Jeff Mullen]

I like it! Excellent job on the animations! However, I’m not sure if it fits for a TV talk show. It’s rather busy (not bad) but the kalediscope-patterns that keep changing get old after a while. Possibly if the whole animation were shortened it would have more of an impact…

Just my thoughts…

Cheers!

Jeff Mullen
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[Jeff Dobrow]

Wow. Lotsa eye candy goin’ on in there! It is nicely done, however I, personally, find it very busy and somewhat disjointed. It feels way to long as well, but I am assuming that is not your decision.

Again,….nicely polished,…..just too repetitive and busy for my tastes.

[Karim Zouak]

I agree — it’s well put together, but the reusing of shots and visual devices gets repetitive… always a challenge with this sort of thing. If you’ve got the option, and you’re not stuck with putting the exact footage where you’ve put it, I’d try swapping out some of the ‘mini tv screen’ images so that you don’t use that same footage quite as much. Maybe you could also change the scale at which you are doing the kaleidoscope thing, sometimes fewer images, sometimes a lot more?

-karim