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Need advice on First Premiere Clip
I just finished making a few minute clip of twins that are having a Bar-Mitzvah soon and one plays basketball and one plays soccer. This clip will be shown at the Bar Mitzvah to 500 guests so that’s why I want your proffessional opinion… I’ve only done weddings and events and this is my first clip.
I’m not making a movie for Hollywood, but I want it to be plesent to view (music mixes, color, etc)!
The story is about both kids who aren’t doing well at the sport. They then do some excersize and get powers and do great. (The Hebrew titles say things like “in the meantime on the other side of town”, “Why am I not doing well”, “3 minutes later”)
Please give me your opinion on things that might need changing:
p.s. don’t mind the quality… I reduced it to upload it to YouTube.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=T5c0DFDh6bE
Thanks!
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