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My First AE Video – The History Of The Tile
Hey fellaz, this is my new (and first video) – The History Of The Tile. It is an ad for an Australian tile cleaning company and I was wondering what do you think about it and what else does it need? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3HSiERzoEvY
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Not bad for a first outing! A couple of nasty typos in the early part of the video. I’m not going to tell you what they are, since you should have caught them before posting the video – that’s a critical part of any production in which typography plays a large part.
Other than that, I would suggest maybe a bit more subtle sell early on: maybe something in the terra cotta section that asks “who cleaned all these statues?”, or “cleaning the Colosseum must have been quite a job!”. I don’t think it would be out of place, since the piece is light-hearted.
Joe Bourke
Owner/Creative Director
Bourke Media
http://www.bourkemedia.com
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