comments plz… anythin to be rectified

[John Dickinson]

Not seeing any file… the URL links to the Rapid Share page but no file… are you sure you uploaded it properly?

John Dickinson
Motionworks
https://www.motionworks.com.au

[Filip Vandueren]

Hi, pretty ok modelling job so far;

here’s my critique:

I’d say his neck should be slightly longer and his shoulders and arms are a bit too buff, Oscar’s shoulders run down a bit, yours has shoulderpads.

The division-line between his ‘man-boobs’ go a little high up. The chest should be wider, but without increasing the width of the total model: what you add at the chest, loose at the arms.

Legs are a bit too long, feet to big and the hips vs. upper legs ratio is a bit too He-Man 😉

When you shorten the legs, keep the length of the sword so both his arms curve back UP towards the handle of the sword. Now his left arm curves down. The two hands should touch and melt into eachother.
The statuette really doesn’t have that musch detail that you ca

Face is ofcourse one of the hardest parts. I’d say understate the mouth more. And a taller forehead.

there’s a lot af small gif-pictures on the ads on oscar.com right now, which I used as reference.