[Tom Ramble]

Wow. I´m glad I jumped on this forum. Thanks Todd for spending the time giving great feedback that I needed. I also think you are right about the pacing. I will do a re-edit and try to cut out a couple of minutes. The thing I struggle with is keeping some sort progression throughout the short. (its certainly no narrative film, but I was trying to have a kind of ´journey´feel throughout.)

I am very new to the world of color, so I really paid no attention to legal broadcasting levels. Although from here on out I´ll try to, in case someone wants to actually broadcast any of my work (heres hoping). I´m glad you thought the Saturation was fitting for the final Carnival sequence, as that was one of the few conscious decisions I made, the rest were on instinct and gut.

This is my first film and I feel overwhelmed by how much there is to learn and practice. Which is why at times I forgot to quickly set the shutter speed accurately after shooting some photos. It seems simple enough but I found myself forgetting basic things while rushing to get a shot before it was too late. Thanks for the reminder, I´ll add it to my mental checklist of things to do before pressing the red button.

Thanks Again Todd.

P.s. Yes I grabbed a non-commercial music license from the new Vimeo Music store

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