[Scott Whitney]

Hi Mark,

Thanks for your reply. I see this as pretty basic, black & white hand drawn sketches but still professionally done so that we can see how the spot progresses from shot to shot..keeping true naturally to composition and axis lines. $33 a sketch would sound pretty cheap if it incorporated some of the qualities that you mentioned.

I’m never looking for what’s cheapest, basically what’s most fair and what will serve our production and the client in the best manner. Not having done much storyboarding work or pricing out those services before, I just wanted to get a sense of what this forum thought might be average.

Thank you,
Scott

Scott Whitney
Bright Circle, Inc.
“We put the Idea in Media”
swhitney@brightcircleinc.com

[Scott Whitney]

Thanks for the feedback…I do appreciate it. I can see how some of it may seem directed towards a production company…but that really isn’t my intent. My intent is to show prospective clients that we keep them very much in mind with everything we do. We want more business! So when I’m setting up examples where I say, “A good production company this…a good production company that” and I’m speaking directly towards things that would benefit a client, I’m trying to say that we know how to treat you right! Without being too blatant. Hopefully that’s getting across. Maybe not. As I said, thank you for the feedback, I’d appreciate more if anyone has anything else.

And Steve…good points. The images might spruce things up, now it’s just seeing if I can invest the additional time doing that! Mike…you’re right, I need to do talk about how video can sell too.

Scott-
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Scott Whitney
Bright Circle, Inc.
“We put the Idea in Media”
https://www.brightcircleinc.com
swhitney@brightcircleinc.com

[Scott Whitney]

Paul,

I just felt the need to say that you are one tough hombre that I have a great deal of respect for. A number of people had a lot of feedback for you (some harsher than what was needed) and you just rolled with it, and accepted it all. Best of luck in your redesign.
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Scott Whitney
Bright Circle, Inc.
“We put the Idea in Media”
https://www.brightcircleinc.com

[Scott Whitney]

If it’s the same group I’m familiar with, it’s underwritten by MEGA Life and Health Insurance. Unfortunately, I can’t say that my experience has been the best with this outfit. Again…I’m basing these comments solely on some of the adventures I’ve encountered. I can’t say that dealing with their customer service people has been an altogether pleasant experience. I’ve had people tell me one thing about what my plan covered, and then another agent say something totally different. I’ve also had some major difficulties trying to upgrade my plan as well. If I had more time to invest in researching another Health Insurance company, I’d do so. If you decide that it’s in your family’s best interest to go with them, I hope your service is better than what I’ve encountered.
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Scott Whitney
Bright Circle, Inc.
“We put the Idea in Media”
https://www.brightcircleinc.com

[Scott Whitney]

Dave,

One other item…and this is simply a heads up and meant with good intentions. On your “About Us” tab on your site, you have a typo…instead of “We use professional Sony HD cameras” you have “We us professional Sony HD cameras.”

I just thought it might be helpful information. Those things are easy to get by…even when we’ve proofed our copy a half dozen times!

Best of luck,
Scott
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Scott Whitney
Bright Circle, Inc.
Orlando, Fl.
“We put the Idea in Media”
https://www.brightcircleinc.com

[Scott Whitney]

Brendan, thanks for the input. I’ll have to check out WebCEO.

Thanks,
Scott
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Scott Whitney
Bright Circle, Inc.
Orlando, Fl
“We put the Idea in Media”
https://www.brightcircleinc.com

[Scott Whitney]

Thanks for your comments/input Brendan. We definitely plan on getting involved with SEO work. It’s certainly a specialty in it’s own right.

Your comments all sound very reasonable and I can tell, “you’ve been there”. There are all kinds of different approaches a business can take in terms of marketing. We’re trying to take advantage of the “newness” and the actual launch, as well as trying to add a “wow” factor in the mailing we do.

We’ll see how successful it turns out to be. 🙂 Hopefully I can provide some input and try to be an asset to this forum in the future. Thanks.

Scott
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Bright Circle, Inc.
Orlando, Fl.
“We put the Idea in Media”
swhitney@brightcircleinc.com