Please Critique my render.

[Dustin Zalesky]

Thanks guys, you guys are really helpful and i’ve posted questions/info on several forums but this one seems to get the quickest and best feedback… some of my other posts like on c4dcafe get viewed 60 times with no replies.

Just wanted to say thanks!!

[Adam Trachtenberg]

Drag. I guess another option is to exclude that object/ material from GI.

[Dustin Zalesky]

Here is my latest render guys!! check it out.. I think the floor depicts a grocery store way more than the last one… and I added some detail to the lights, the fade at the tips like real lights now.. and I made the illumination color a bit off white..

if you guys have any more suggestions on details/realism/compliments, keep it coming hehe 😉

[Brian Jones]

in terms of realism you’d never get so many bottles so perfectly lined up and all exactly the same rotation (excepting for the product you are going to focus on at the end of course 🙂 for what it’s worth. It seems to have gotten a bit darker and supermarkets are usually pretty bright, maybe up the primary intensity in the GI settings… Lastly, the reflection in the floor is so clear, it’s perhaps possible but not very common, I’d cut it back so it’s not so defined. Lights look great with the new ends.