Need some critiques…

[Dan Johnson]

I think it was cool. Good job. I think with it being bikers in all it could be a little more high energy, what I mean is shots like the store front can be fast moving wipe out zoom to show sign type of shoots. Cool stuff dude!

[David Johnson]

My two cents is that its very good.

The only thing that came to mind as a possible improvement stems from something a teacher told me a long time ago … there should always be a logical reason/rationale for an effect or stylization … not just an effect for the sake of a cool effect. Referring specifically to the beginning sepia-toned sequence, are you trying to convey dated, historical footage to show that these guys have been doing this stuff for a long time? It seems that’s typically the reason for using sepia or B&W, but I didn’t really get that aged feeling from that sequence. I did notice the film scratches, but other than that, the footage looks fairly new and pristine so perhaps it’s just a matter of slightly overstating the aged look … maybe a little film grain, flicker, stutter, etc. I might even shorten that part a bit, but maybe that’s just me.

Just a thought … don’t mean to sound critical … it’s great work!