Need comments for my first Demo REEL: Currently in production.

[Le Quoc hai]

Really cool! Really delicous! Just take care of the tempo, for me, rather slow!

Le Quoc Hai
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[Nicholas Toth]

Looks good
You need to get rid of the milk man whos in it fifty times, and downsize it. Otherwise looks nice.

[Spritemaster]

I don’t think it’s your first post here 🙂

https://forums.creativecow.net/cgi-bin/new_read_post.cgi?univpostid=864515&forumid=2&postid=864522&pview=t

You also have a tutorial published at the Cow… thanks for this BTW 😉

You have some great stuff in your reel, but I join prvious responders in suggesting that you make it sigificantly shorter. It’s stretched way too thin. Also, I feel the low poly character animation work is of lesser quality than the rest, and its style does not really fit in there.

Good luck!

AA

[Vince Becquiot]

I very much agree with the last two posts. Very nice work. I would lose the 2nd Qu

[Justin Productions]

Yeah that was awesome. Could you tell me in what city you live? I live near Montreal. Do you speak french?

Nice work dude. Was the truck with the cars on it was made in 3D or it was real?

Good job!

Justin Productions
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[Aharon Rabinowitz]

Yeah, there’s a little too much repetition, and the low poly animation kind of kills it.

I’m guessing that the low poly character stuff is something you did as a personal project and that is somewhat siginificant or “dear” to you. You have a lot of very strong stuff in there, so dont deteract from that becasue you can’t let go. There’s tons of older stuff I’ve removed from my reel, even though i really wanted it in there.

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[Darius2010]

Nothing to add that has not been said. I like the milk man but I think you should remove him toward the end and remove the clip of the rear of the trailer.

Aside from that, you have a skill that I am trying to aquire! How did you create this animation? What software and do you have any tutorial so I can learn this:

Can’t attach file 🙁

[Darius2010]

Okay…here it is: