Just wanted some feedback on this edit:

[Ron Lindeboom]

I thought that you did a good job on the scene. Maybe you could have tightened-in on the chocolate a time or two as it is such a key element in the scene; especially when she reaches for both pieces at once.

Other than that, I am not sure that there is much else to do other than you have done.

Best regards,

Ron Lindeboom
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