-
Imaginary Title Sequence
As you guys mentioned that my clips were short and asked me to make longer clips; here is a “30 Sec” title sequence; based on tips from this forum tutorial page also Andrew Kramer “3D Room” “Smoke Screen” tutorials.
I had problems with the Audio; I posted last week; got your advices to make it .wav format, but still a little bit the Audio is off; or not following the motion.Any ways, your opinions are always welcomed.
https://www.eyadstudio.com/Media/prison_cel/prison_cel.htmlThanks
Eyad -
5 Replies
-
Settle down on the jerkiness. It’s too irritating. Smoother and subtler are the ways to go.
— TL
-
Try to be a little more organic with the camera wiggle. The seesawing back and forth looks a little too mechanical and likely to induce seasickness. Subtle smooth movements back and forth at varying degrees to give the sense of a hand held camera or that the viewer is floating. Then mix it up a little as you move from position to position to the next title.
Erik
-
Agreed with the “see-saw” comment. I hard a hard time making it through the who sequence without feeling queasy. A slight initial push is all I would think is needed, as there’s a lot going on.
Joey -
try experimenting with the wiggle expression on the camera position to get a bit of random motion if you feel you need it. What you have here is too much motion and the rocking, swinging motion is overkill.
-
I reduced the “see-saw” effect; hopefully it’s better now; I could use the wiggle expression, but my idea was to add different movement to the camera I mean the “see-saw” I didn’t want it a steady move.
Yes; it looked like a see saw; but hopefully now it is not.
Thanks guys
Reply to this Discussion! Login or Sign Up