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  • Feedback on a Contest Edit

    Posted by Lake Kilpatrick on December 21, 2015 at 9:26 pm

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_OZKYl6Ko0g

    First of all, let me apologize if this is the wrong place to post this. This was edited in Adobe Premiere and I couldn’t find any suitable sections to post for feedback/constructive criticism. Anyways, I had a lot of fun with this footage and I’m just looking for feedback to help me improve my edits in the future. Thanks!

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    Lake Kilpatrick replied 10 years, 5 months ago 3 Members · 4 Replies
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  • Christina Rule

    December 21, 2015 at 10:23 pm

    really well done, I like it! I really liked how you chose to not have the sound of the bikes in the beginning. Nice work!

    http://www.christinarule.com

  • Lake Kilpatrick

    December 22, 2015 at 12:49 am

    Thanks a lot! I really appreciate that.

    The raw footage actually didn’t have any audio, so that sort of inspired me to go in the direction that I did. It became a bit of a chore finding suitable bike sounds to use for the shots that I wanted.

  • Nathan Mcalpine

    December 22, 2015 at 2:28 pm

    I think it looks and sounds good! I like the pacing for the most part. The crowd with their hands up while the bike passes by is a cool shot. The color change is a fun effect. The one thing that got me was the “available on iTunes”. I don’t know what is available on iTunes. If you’re promoting a product I don’t think the brand was obvious. If it’s just more of a creative edit and not a marketing tool though, I think it’s well done.

    Nathan McAlpine
    Commercial Producer

  • Lake Kilpatrick

    December 22, 2015 at 7:53 pm

    Thanks for the kind words, Nathan!

    I’m not promoting anything with this. The ‘Available on iTunes’ graphic and the ‘Edit Contest’ graphic at the beginning were stipulations of the contest. Thanks for checking it out!

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