critique needed

[Brandon]

made a mistake, need to fix it

[Brandon]

Ok, it’s fixed. Just so you know, I don’t have the video that I’m going to use yet, so I had to use different video.

[Chris Tompkins]

it looks good. You’re doing well.

[Andrew Corneles]

I think it’s a good start,
things might hold still a little long in the head and tail,
and I hate the typeface, but that’s a personal thing –
so I can’t hold it against you.

keep on working!

Andy Corneles – Video Wrangler – http://www.efponline.com

[Jeremy Webb]

looks good overall, something easy you could do to improve it is change your linear keyframes to easy ease. i think that would make it more organic. and i’m not a fan of the font either.

[Brandon]

I know, it’s hard to read. I should probably change it. Thanks for the input.

[Alexander Gao]

i like it

Alexander Gao

“When the revolution happens, I’ll be leading it.”

[Axel Rogge]

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