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  Just wanted some feedback on this edit:

  Posted by Daniel San on May 15, 2009 at 5:28 pm

  Just wanted some feedback on this edit:

  https://www.vimeo.com/4659922

  Ron Lindeboom replied 17 years, 3 months ago 2 Members · 1 Reply
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  Ron Lindeboom

  May 19, 2009 at 3:00 pm

  I thought that you did a good job on the scene. Maybe you could have tightened-in on the chocolate a time or two as it is such a key element in the scene; especially when she reaches for both pieces at once.

  Other than that, I am not sure that there is much else to do other than you have done.

  Best regards,

  Ron Lindeboom
  creativecow.net

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