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Activity Forums Cinematography Short Nature Film, Please Critique!

  • Abraham Cote

    July 24, 2014 at 5:13 pm

    Nice photography. Is this just practice with using the cameras? I see you used the contour roam? actually very nice footage coming out of that camera, couldn’t tell the difference between the stuff shot with the T5i.

    No narrative thread though, wonder what the vid is about?

  • Rick Wise

    July 24, 2014 at 5:39 pm

    In my view, needs a lot of trimming. Some shots work well. Some shots are awkward with jerky moves/zooms, bad pans. Way too long and repetitive. Runs over 3:30. Much stronger at :30 or :60.

    Rick Wise
    Cinematographer
    MFA/BFA Lighting and Camera Instructor Academy of Art University
    San Francisco Bay Area
    https://www.RickWiseDP.com

  • Shea Stair

    July 24, 2014 at 6:14 pm

    It was basically a test of the cameras, I got the T5i about 2 days before i shot this video.
    Contour was used only for the underwater shots. Thanks for your feedback

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